This is factually solid. The post correctly identifies that Maven—not AI chatbots—targeted the school, and the Guardian source confirms a decades-old database failure, not algorithmic decision-making, led to the tragedy. The post makes a sharp rhetorical point: instead of blaming LLMs, we should focus on Palantir's targeting infrastructure and human failures to update records. The framing is deliberately contrarian, but the claims hold up. Missing some nuance: the post doesn't explain what systemic incentives prevented database updates or why Maven became embedded in military infrastructure without public scrutiny—context that would strengthen the structural critique.